Thank you ALL for your numerous responses! After doing some research after posting, I beleieve it was my heat that was my issue.
I brought the metal up to a deep orange (my cheap gas forge only gets up to a bright orange) and then stoppep hammering once the heat glow dissapreaed (once the steel was grey again and I saw no red)
so thanks for the tip Glenn and Dickb!
ThomasPowers: I bought some high carbon steel but I'm scared to work it and destroy my steel. Where might I get some old auto springs? Are they very expensive at pick n pulls?
BillyBones: I took a look at the readfirst page, and I do apologize for not digging around before I posted this question. I know very little about balcksmithing as it is, so I'm sure some further research would do me good.
I am not quenching, I know a little about the effects of heat treating steels and doing such would make my steel more brittle, right?
I got some 1/2" round stock from home depot, but I just found my steel recycle plant sells scrap for much cheaper
I have a small ball peen hammer and a 3 lb cross peen hammer (the latter from harbor freight which I rounded and tightened up the handle fit on)
My anvil is a 18" section of railroad rail turned upsidedown and clamped into a vise on my welding table. The edges on that are reasonably crisp
Overall I think that I'm not working with enough heat and I need to be careful not to actuate and make hinges that bend back and forth to form cracks in my peice.
Also: would it be better to use the flat bottom of my rail or the rounded top as my anvil surface? Would you guys reccomend something different for an anvil (besides of course shelling out the cold hard cash for a real anvil)?
One more thing: It seems you guys like to run a tight ship around here, should I make any alterations to my post formatting (as this IS a little messy)?
Thank you all for the help, resources, and warm welcome!