3DistinctKnocks Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 My 12 year old daughter, Peggy was watching me at my forge this morning. She decided to write a poem as a gift to the members of this forum. The Blacksmith by Peggy R. McMillen Surrounded by his tools, the fire leaping to and fro, the blacksmith will weld and forge Everyday, all day long. Cinder and rust will float in the air. The small flies of fire making sure that he will choke. But still the blacksmith will weld and forge Everyday, all day long. In the hot blinding sun, he still continues his labor. The cinders choking him as he forges on the hot metal burns his hands and face. But still the blacksmith will weld and forge Everyday, all day long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BCROB Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 one of my girls is 12 also so I can relate.............arent they awesome !! what a great poem and say hi to her from Jamie (my daughter) she just read it as well !! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matt Smith Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 shes good for 12 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3DistinctKnocks Posted November 10, 2013 Author Share Posted November 10, 2013 Thanks, BCROB and Matt. Interestingly, Peggy's twin sister is named Jayme. My nickname is Jamie as well! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beth Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 thats great peggy! :) how wonderful to be be able to write poems - and also to inspire them. nice one peggy and jamie! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EtownAndrew Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoCal Dave Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 Great poem. She is very observant and notices things many would not. You are a lucky man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glenn Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 Give that lady a hammer and some hot iron !! If she can do that will with words, just think what she can do with metal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charles R. Stevens Posted November 10, 2013 Share Posted November 10, 2013 Thank her for me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windancer Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Tell her she touched my life as well. Thank you! Dave Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3DistinctKnocks Posted November 11, 2013 Author Share Posted November 11, 2013 Thank you all. I will pass on the remarks to her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Frosty Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Thank you Peggy, you catch the heart of the craft in a touching way. You are a wordsmith true. I hereby award you a great big warm Frosty hug, you may collect any time you wish. Hugs, Frosty The Lucky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snakeriveridaho Posted November 11, 2013 Share Posted November 11, 2013 Thanks to Peggy for the poem, I enjoyed reading it. Both my kids liked it also! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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